Kapiti Island
Once upon a time there were three hills and their names were Kapiti, Mana, Otaki. They were neighbours. Months and months went by then randomly they all were fighting. Kapiti said, “I have had a enough of this”. So that night Kapiti went down to the beach and said, “help, help, someone help! After a while he was being dragged by something but what? Kapiti looked up. It was a GIANTTTTTTTTT! The giant said, “where do you want to go?” Kapiti said, “where the ocean is”. But the sun started to come up and the great big GIANT ran away. And that is how we got Kapiti island.
By Chloe.
Chloe awesome but no and's at the start of sentene's if you want the and then get rid of the full stop well done ;}
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